Essay Concede-Section

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Hello, I wonder if in essay concede-section, is it okay to write as:
(However, people also argue …) or (In point of view of others …) + and then I renounce this idea by my other reasoning?

Here, I am preventing myself from debunking my own reasoning but at the same time trying to show I am also aware about the other’s perception. Using ‘However, I concede …’ makes me feel uneasy that I am going against my own idea.

I would appreciate any help or suggestion.

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Yes, it’s totally fine.

I think you could phrase this better. Something like

  • Some argue that…

  • From another perspective…

would work better.

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Thank you joan.

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