Evaluating the essay introduction

Prompt: The Luxuries and Conveniences of Contemporary Life Prevent People From Developing into Truly Strong and Independent Individuals

Introduction:

Hardships and failures in one’s life prime a person to become a better version of themself. The absence of these hardships often leads to softening of the personality. The prompt conveys the same by highlighting the hindrance that prevents people from becoming strong and independent individuals. I mostly agree with this idea for the following two reasons. However, I do concede that it is absolutely ok to live a comfortable life and the opinion might be subjective to an individual’s mindset.