Hi guys, I have written essay for the first time using the writing tool provided in the gregmat website. i got 2.0 score . I have attached image of my writing . I am just got scared with the score . Kindly give feedback! .
have you watched the Gregmat issue essay video? It will help. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSL3XXrFfH4&t=223s
If you already have, I think you need to rewatch it, take better notes, then drill one aspect of the essay at a time.