Should I change the conclusion template to the one below? Because I felt more comfortable when I write. Also, it emphasised more the position I took.
In conclusion, although X(the concession main idea) may offer certain advantages/disadvantages, Y(body1 and 2 main ideas) are ultimately more significant due to the reasons discussed above.
Our template is: In conclusion, rephrase thesis(body1,2 and concession), refer to the outline(just with writing at the end of the thesis body1 and body2: for the reasons above)